商务英语作文?BEC 商务英语 考试中级经典 作文 范文1 风格:两篇写作,1篇是正式,1篇是非正式。 1)短篇:memo, note, email 2)长篇:fax, proposal , letter(诉信、 道歉信 、邀请信、询价信、 感谢信 等), report (report on、introduction、findings、conclusions、那么,商务英语作文?一起来了解一下吧。
Report 部门工作总结
This report aims at outlining which aspects of our department function most effectively, which ones need improvement and how to achieve an efficient improvement.
First of all, it needs to be stressed out that the majority of the team generally shows a real team spirit, is willing to do his best to prioritize some smooth interactions with customers and is not reluctant to work outside the normal working hours.
On top of that, every member of the team has been carefully selected for his/her excellent qualifications in terms of negotiating skills and communications abilities.
As a result, it came out of the recent survey, conducted with most of our customers, that our department has an excellent image outside the company.
Unfortunately, however, some aspects appear to be less brilliant. As part of our sales force, people spend most of their time on the phone and cannot fit any training course within their schedule. As there is no clear strategy to encourage the employees to attend training courses, they may feel guilty to decide to use part of their working time to get a better knowledge on a computer software for instance.
This being, said, I strongly recommend to define a clear strategy encouraging people to register, at least, to two training courses, each year.
This would help them to understand that, whatever their initial qualifications may be, it may bring benefit to both them and the company to improve them.
例:The Internet provides an amazing forum for the free exchange of ideas. Given the relatively few restrictions governing access and usage, it is the communications modal equivalent of international waters.
题目:Alienation and the Internet (网络,你“离间”了人群?)
你是一个每日无网不成欢的“网虫”、“网蝶”? 抑或是扮饥一个问世间网为何物的“网盲”?网络正潜移默厅御返化地改变着现代人的生活,而现代人也就拆中其与自身的关系进行着深深的思索。
The Internet provides an amazing forum for the free exchange of ideas. Given the relatively few restrictions governing access and usage, it is the communications modal equivalent of international waters.1 It is my personal belief that the human potential can only be realized by the globalization of ideas. I developed this position2 years before the Internet came into wide spread use. And I am excited at the potential for the Internet to dramatically alter our global society for the better. However I am also troubled by the possible unintended negative consequences.
There has been much talk about the "new information age." But much less widely reported has been the notion that the Internet may be responsible for furthering the fragmentation of society by alienating its individual users.3 At first this might sound like an apparent contradiction: how can something, that is on the one hand responsible for global unification by enabling the free exchange of ideas, alienate the participants?
I had a recent discussion with a friend of mine who has what he described as a "problem" with the Internet. When I questioned him further he said that he was "addicted,"4 and has "forced" himself to go off-line. He said that he felt like an alcoholic, in that moderate use of the Internet was just not possible for him.5 I have not known this fellow to be given to exaggeration, therefore when he described his internet binges,6 when he would spend over twenty-four hours on line non-stop, it gave me pause to think. He said, "the Internet isn't real, but I was spending all my time on line, so I just had to stop." He went on to say that all of the time that he spent on line might have skewed7 his sense of reality, and that it made him feel lonely and depressed.
The fragmentation of society has been lamented for some time now. It seems to me that it probably began in earnest after World War II when a generation returned from doing great deeds overseas. They won the war, and by God they were going to win the peace. Automobile ownership became commonplace and suburbs were created. "Progress" was their mantra.8 So even prior to the Internet's widespread popularity, folks were already becoming distanced from their extended families and neighbors. And when we fast-forward to today we see an almost cruel irony in that people can and often do develop on-line relationships with folks on the other side of the globe, without leaving their homes. But at the expense of the time that would have otherwise been available for involvement in other activities which might foster a sense of community in their villages, towns and cities.
Last weekend my wife and I invited our extended family to our home to celebrate our daughter's birthday. During the celebration my young nephew spent the entire time on my computer playing a simulated war game. My brother-in-law and I were chatting near by and it struck us that in generations past, his son, my nephew, would have been outside playing with his friends. But now the little fellow goes on line to play his games against his friends in cyberspace.
It seems to me that the Internet is a powerful tool that presents an opportunity for the advancement of the acquisition and application of knowledge. However, based on my personal experience I can understand how, as they surf the web some folks might be confronted with cognitive overload.9 And I can also understand how one might have his or her sense of reality distorted in the process. Is the Internet a real place? Depending upon how a "real place" is defined it might very well be. At the very least, I believe that when we use the Internet, we are forced to ask fundamental questions about how we perceive the world about us—perhaps another unintended consequence. Some would argue that the virtual existences created by some users who debate, shop, travel and have romance on line are in fact not real. While others would argue that, since in practical terms, folks are debating, shopping, travelling and having romance, the converse is true.
All of this being said, I believe that the key to realizing the potential of the Internet is in achieving balance in our lives. This would allow us to maximize its potential without losing our sense of place.10 However like most things that is easier said than done. It seems to me that we are a society that values immediate gratification above all else, and what better place to achieve it than in cyberspace, where the cyber-world is your cyber-oyster.11 The widespread use of the automobile forever changed our society and culture, and perhaps a similar sort of thing is occurring now. I am not at all certain where the "information superhighway" will lead us: some say to Utopia,12 while others feel it's the road to hell. But I do know that we all have the ability to maintain our sense of place in the world. Whether we choose to take advantage of this ability is another matter.
1.上网的途径及网络的应用所受到的限制相对还比较少,就这点来说,网上交流相当于在国际海域行驶。
这里我给大家分享了3篇bec中级写作范文,希望可以提高大家的写作技巧。
BEC商务英语考试中级经典作文范文1
风格:两篇写作,1篇是正式,1篇是非正式。
1)短篇:memo, note, email
2)长篇:fax, proposal , letter(诉信、道歉信、邀请信、询价信、感谢信等), report (report on...、introduction、findings、conclusions、recommendations前面四个一个也不能少,至于最后的recommendations要看当时的题目要求)
要求
?the purpose of the correspondence
?references to previous communication
?factual details
?the feelings and attitude of the writer
?the level of formality
?the opening sentence
?the closing sentence
?paragraphing
?the desired outcome
PART ONE
You work for a company which produces laser printers. You are visiting another company, Softcell, to buy some company software for your department. They have expressed an interest in your company's printers and you would like to take twenty brochures and three sample printers with you.
Write a short note to Mr. Jim Asano, the Sales Manager.
Asking for his permission to take these items.
Explaining why you want them.
Mentioning the time and date when you want to collect them.
总体:这是一篇小作文,要求写一个MEMO,字数要求40-50字。
Dear
Thanks for your satisfied corporation for such a long time.
While, during these days, what makes me confusied is that you sent me the wrong number of stock for 3 times. It has made me a big trouble and nearly broke the perfect impression.
We hope you could correct you mistakes.
According to our longstanding business relationship, please do not make such trouble, or i will turn to elsewhere.
Your early reply will be very appreciated,
Best wishes.
Sincerely
XXX
这样的通知完全可以如下面这样弯磨写。有这样的模版埋核斗,写多少次都不怕,收信的人也容易获取氏肢关键信息。
Dear xxx,
Re: xxxx Meeting -- [subject of the meeting]
Kindly be informed of the following regarding the next xxxx Meeting:
Subject:xxxx
Time & Date:xxxx
Venue:xxxx
Material required:xxxx
Participants: xxx, xxx, xxx, xxx......
xxx will chair the meeting.Your punctual attendance will be appeciated.
Thanks and best regards,
xxx
[title]
以上就是商务英语作文的全部内容,商务英语Proposal作文的格式主要分为五大部分:1、题目 用来概括Proposal主要是关于什么内容。2、引言 这部分主要是要描述问题的简介,对Proposal所要陈述的内容进行简单的说明。例如:这篇Proposal主要是为了描述和分析在市场经济中科技使用的可能性。3、背景和发现 这部分主要是陈述Proposal中研究问题的现状。